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poem: Nothing Gold Can Stay

- Robert Frost


Nature's first green is gold,
Her hardest hue to hold.
Her early leaf's a flower;
But only so an hour.
Then leaf subsides to leaf,
So Eden sank to grief,
So dawn goes down to day
Nothing gold can stay.



I think I've shared this poem before, but the end of summer is a good time to visit it again, with perhaps a bit more attention to sound and detail, following Stephen Fry's advice in The Ode Less Travelled. So--reading it aloud, here are a few things I notice, one from each line:

  1. In the first line, the emphasis falls on green and gold

  2. All the h's in the second line

  3. Lots of fairly broad e/ea sounds in third line

  4. The vowel sounds then contract, which fits with the meaning of the fourth line

  5. "Then leaf subsides to leaf" has baffled me for a while, but on this closer reread I think the first leaf is flower references in the second line, while the second leaf is just a plain old leaf--so it's talking about that period of transition when a flowering tree sheds its blossoms and the leaves come out and it looks just like any other tree

  6. No comment for this line, really--it's pretty straightforward, though one I quite like

  7. The iambs place the focus on "dawn", "down", and "day"; they also make the line sound like a downward staircase

  8. Unlike the previous seven lines, this one has only five syllables, lending it a feeling of finality

What do you see/hear?
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