February 10th, 2014

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more blank verse

Another exercise from The Ode Less Travelled: all the A pairs are end-stopped, all the B pairs aren't.

1. Outside the Window
A) The snow comes down like broken pillows would,
or like their insides would if left to fall.

B) Like insides from a thousand shattered, torn
or ruined pillows, snow comes falling down.

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