Snagged from synecdochic: Give me the title of a story I've never written, and feedback telling me what you liked best about it, and I will tell you any of: the first sentence, the last sentence, the thing that made me want to write it, the biggest problem I had while writing it, why it almost never got posted, the scene that hit the cutting room floor but that I wish I'd been able to salvage, or something else that I want readers to know.
John unintentionally travels back in time. Does he tell
No one, and try to fix things entirely on his own?
Sumner, because John doesn't want to get thrown in the brig?
Elizabeth, because she's the boss/John's used to working with her/other?
Ford, because Ford actually sometimes listens to John and can help him finagle things?
Rodney, because who else would he tell?
Teyla, because she's outside the system/the native guide and can help finagle where they go, and when?
Someone else? (Bates, anyone?)
No one, but things go very wrong? (Yeah, I'm not writing this one)
If someone else, who is it?